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Northern Pacific Sea Star Invasion Control

话题:北太平洋海星入侵控制方法

📖 Reading Passage - 阅读原文

💡 阅读任务:3分钟阅读,找出3个控制海星的方法。红色高亮 = 关键观点。

Northern Pacific Sea Star Invasion

The Northern Pacific sea star, which is native to the coasts of Japan, Korea, and China, has recently appeared thousands of kilometers away. Because this sea star now threatens to harm marine ecosystems in new and distant areas, scientists are currently investigating ways of controlling the spread of invasive Northern Pacific sea stars.

1Quicklime

One method of reducing Northern Pacific sea star populations is by administering a poison called quicklime. Quicklime in its powdered form can be spread over large areas of the seafloor invaded by the sea stars. While quicklime destroys sea stars, it does not harm commercially important mollusks, such as oysters, scallops, and mussels, which are cultivated on the seafloor in many waters.

2Introducing Parasites

A second strategy is to introduce parasites that naturally control the spread of Northern Pacific sea stars in their native habitat. One major reason why Northern Pacific sea star populations are flourishing in distant waters is the absence of natural enemies, such as parasites. In their native environment, male sea stars are infected by parasites that specifically attack their reproductive system. If these parasites became established in distant waters, invasive Northern Pacific sea star populations could be significantly decreased.

3Treating Ballast Water

A third measure involves sterilizing ballast water. Ships that have unloaded their cargo take aboard some amount of sea water as a weight and balance stabilizer. This sea water is referred to as ballast water. Sea star larvae (immature sea stars) float freely in the sea and are often taken up in ballast pumps. After taking aboard ballast water with numerous larvae in Northern Pacific waters, ships dump this water in ports thousands of kilometers away and thus contribute to the spread of these sea stars. If ships treated their ballast water with chemicals before releasing it in a different location, Northern Pacific sea stars could be prevented from spreading to new areas.

🎯 阅读要点总结:
  • 方法1:生石灰 - 杀海星但不伤软体动物
  • 方法2:寄生虫 - 攻击雄性生殖系统
  • 方法3:压舱水 - 化学处理阻止幼虫传播

📋 题目要求

任务:总结讲座中的要点,确保说明它们如何挑战阅读文章中讨论的具体方法。

🔍 话题背景

北太平洋海星原产于日本、韩国和中国海岸,最近出现在数千公里外的地区。 因为这种海星威胁到新地区的海洋生态系统,科学家正在研究控制其传播的方法。

📊 阅读文章:3个控制方法

1 使用生石灰 (Quicklime)
将生石灰粉末撒在海床上杀死海星,但不会伤害牡蛎、扇贝等商业软体动物
2 引入寄生虫 (Introducing Parasites)
引入自然天敌寄生虫,这些寄生虫会攻击雄性海星的生殖系统,显著减少种群数量。
3 处理压舱水 (Treating Ballast Water)
用化学物质处理船只的压舱水,防止海星幼虫通过船只传播到新地区。

🎧 听力讲座:3个反驳

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完整听力 - 开头总述
1 生石灰会伤害本地海星
虽然不伤害软体动物,但会杀死本地海星。生石灰在海床上长期有效,当本地海星迁入后也会被杀死,破坏当地生态系统
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2 寄生虫无法完全阻止繁殖
寄生虫不能完全破坏雄性生殖系统,被感染的雄性仍能使雌性受精。而单个雌性能产2000万个卵,所以影响不大。
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3 幼虫还会通过其他途径传播
压舱水不是唯一传播途径。幼虫会粘在小船底部和渔具上,无论是否处理压舱水,海星仍会继续传播。
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⚖️ 阅读 vs 听力 对应关系

📖 阅读观点 1

生石灰很安全:

生石灰可以杀死海星,但不会伤害商业软体动物(牡蛎、扇贝、贻贝)。

🎧 听力反驳 1

会伤害本地生态:

虽然不伤商业软体动物,但会杀死本地海星。生石灰长期有效,本地海星迁入后也会死,破坏生态系统

📖 阅读观点 2

寄生虫能控制种群:

引入寄生虫,攻击雄性生殖系统,可以显著减少海星数量。

🎧 听力反驳 2

繁殖力太强:

寄生虫不能完全破坏雄性生殖系统,感染的雄性仍能让雌性受精。雌性能产2000万卵,影响有限。

📖 阅读观点 3

处理压舱水能阻止传播:

海星幼虫通过船只压舱水传播,用化学物质处理压舱水可以防止传播。

🎧 听力反驳 3

还有其他传播途径:

幼虫会粘在小船和渔具上,压舱水不是唯一途径,处理压舱水无法完全阻止传播。

💡 写作策略:听力的每个反驳都要对应阅读的一个观点。不要只写听力,也不要只写阅读,要说清楚"阅读说A,但听力反驳说B"。

📝 套用综合写作模板

第1段:开头

The reading passage argues that scientists can use three methods to control the spread of invasive Northern Pacific sea stars. 阅读总观点

However, the lecturer disagrees with this view. 听力立场

第2段:反驳点1 - 生石灰

First, the reading states that quicklime can destroy sea stars without harming commercially important mollusks. 阅读观点1

However, the lecturer refutes this by saying that quicklime also kills native sea stars, which are critical to local ecosystems. 听力反驳

For example, the lecturer mentions that quicklime remains active on the seafloor for a long time, and when native sea stars move into areas previously occupied by invasive ones, they will also die. 具体例子

第3段:反驳点2 - 寄生虫

Second, the reading claims that introducing parasites that attack male sea stars' reproductive systems can significantly decrease invasive populations. 阅读观点2

In contrast, the lecturer argues that these parasites do not completely destroy the reproductive system. 听力反驳

Specifically, infected male sea stars can still fertilize female eggs, and since a single female can produce 20 million eggs, the impact would be minimal. 具体说明

第4段:反驳点3 - 压舱水

Finally, the reading suggests that sterilizing ballast water can prevent sea star larvae from spreading to new areas. 阅读观点3

However, the lecturer points out that ballast water is not the only transport method. 听力反驳

According to the lecture, sea star larvae stick to small boat bottoms and fishing equipment, so invasive sea stars will likely continue spreading regardless of ballast water treatment. 根据讲座

⚡ 记住:黄色高亮的都是固定句式,考试时直接用!只需要把内容填进去。

✅ 完整范文(180词)

The reading passage argues that scientists can use three methods to control the spread of invasive Northern Pacific sea stars. However, the lecturer disagrees with this view.

First, the reading states that quicklime can destroy sea stars without harming commercially important mollusks. However, the lecturer refutes this by saying that quicklime also kills native sea stars, which are critical to local ecosystems. For example, the lecturer mentions that quicklime remains active on the seafloor for a long time, and when native sea stars move into areas previously occupied by invasive ones, they will also die.

Second, the reading claims that introducing parasites that attack male sea stars' reproductive systems can significantly decrease invasive populations. In contrast, the lecturer argues that these parasites do not completely destroy the reproductive system. Specifically, infected male sea stars can still fertilize female eggs, and since a single female can produce 20 million eggs, the impact would be minimal.

Finally, the reading suggests that sterilizing ballast water can prevent sea star larvae from spreading to new areas. However, the lecturer points out that ballast water is not the only transport method. According to the lecture, sea star larvae stick to small boat bottoms and fishing equipment, so invasive sea stars will likely continue spreading regardless of ballast water treatment.

📊 评分要点:
  • ✅ 开头明确说明阅读和听力的关系
  • ✅ 3个反驳点都写到了
  • ✅ 每个反驳都有:阅读观点 + 听力反驳 + 具体例子
  • ✅ 使用了连接词(First, Second, Finally, However)
  • ✅ 客观陈述,没有加"I think"
  • ✅ 字数180词,符合150-225要求
🎯 考试建议:
  • 听力时重点记3个反驳的理由和例子
  • 写作时先写框架(4段开头句),再填内容
  • 每段用First/Second/Finally开头
  • 每段都用However转折
  • 检查:有没有说"I think"?字数够不够?